User talk:OnceUponAdrine

This user is a student editor in Soka_University_of_America/WRIT101-01_(Fall_2019) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:33, 23 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You have an overdue training assignment.

Please complete the assigned training modules. --Debbie Goss (talk) 21:16, 13 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Article Peer Review

Soledad, The article does a good job with background information. The history section, in particular, impressed me. I would suggest that you possibly provide more pictures because I bet that there is a blueprint or something that would be helpful or informative. I think the most important thing you can do to improve is maybe to add information on the layout of the system. I didn’t notice anything that impacts both your and my article because of the difference in subjects. I think the lead is very well written. It is actually not super dry to read. I do think the lead reflects the most important information. I think the lead has an equal distribution of information. Finally, the article is definitely structured in the most natural way, each category makes sense after the previous. Sofia — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sofia--szigethy (talk • contribs) 07:19, 19 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Skyler Peer Review

Overall, I think the article does a really good job of explaining the New York water supply system. I think that it really well explains the history and all that. I would say that there could definitely be some more on the failures of the water supply system, as it can't be perfect. Look up news articles and see if there have been any problems reported, maybe it would be cool to add another section of a timeline about what happened when, how New York addressed the problem, etc. Timelines are always helpful and easy to read. Best of luck!