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Hi Paul, please see the Talk page of your new article. Thanks for fixing the issues the earlier editor pointed out, I just had to adress the NPOV issues and it was ok to go. David_FLXD(Talk) 19:23, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
Hi Paul, I see you have taken out the "widely identified as a star performer" bit which I put into your opening para. Now, that is not a problem, it's your article! The reason I put it in was that there was nothing in the opening paragraph to say why is this person notable, and it is important that there should be something. What I put in was just to try to address that, and I felt that you had supplied enough references to support the statement. However, you do need to put in something to similar effect, if in your own words and highlighting what you think is most notable about LI. I was all prepared to decline the article, but you had done enough work, and shown enough references, that I had to go ahead and accept it!