User talk:Rawfam

Ways to improve Lumix Da Don

Hi, I'm Gab4gab. Rawfam, thanks for creating Lumix Da Don!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. The Quotes section needs citations giving the source of the quotes.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. Gab4gab (talk) 17:52, 19 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello again Rawfam. I've taken the five references you added to Lumix Da Don and placed them inline. That way they're near the facts they support. Of course I may have placed them wrong. Adjust as needed. All of the article content needs to be supported by reliable sources. Inline citations are required for any material that is challenged or likely to be challenged, and for all quotations. So there's more to be done. Have fun editing. I hope you find my edits helpful. Gab4gab (talk) 02:33, 25 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I've removed several sections that had no sources. If you have published sources for the material cite those when restoring the sections. If not then the material doesn't belong in a Wikipedia article. Gab4gab (talk) 01:54, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]