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1) Post new sections at the bottom of the page.
2) PLEASE LINK TO YOUR ARTICLE, I go through a myriad of pages a day, I won't know what you're talking about unless you link your article.
3) Please don't request me to re-review your article unless I've specifically asked you to do so. AfC is incredibly backlogged and someone will get to it when they can.
- 1 07:07, 17 October 2017 (UTC) review of submission Hostinger International
- 2 09:00, 24 October 2017 (UTC) review of my submission by NGFrem
- 3 02:19:53, 30 October 2017 review of submission by Alpertuzcu
- 4 23:21:44, 13 November 2017 review of submission by Randomloves74
- 5 Adding some references after your review
- 6 06:45:27, 21 November 2017 review of submission by AnRoCa
- 7 My submission at Articles for creation: Francoism in Catalonia (October 24)
- 8 14:10:22, 21 November 2017 review of submission by PATRIZIA KinderHaus-Stiftung
07:07, 17 October 2017 (UTC) review of submission Hostinger International
Good morning. FYI: article has been updated with reliable sources. Can you please have a look? Thanks.
== 23:46:25, 25 October 2017 review of submission by Aasen h ==.
Hi we have added this artists previous wikipedia page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Her_Royal_Harness) to this submission. We believe this clarifies her notability. Thanks
09:00, 24 October 2017 (UTC) review of my submission by NGFrem
Hello! Thank you for reviewing my draft for "Neemat Frem" Draft:Neemat Frem. Kindly note that my name is Samer Chemaly, and I just created the account with the name NGFrem but the email associated with the account is mine email@example.com, and this is not an autobiography. Appreciate providing me with more details about how to add the adequate refrences and appreciate giving me an example so I fix the article and submit it. Thank you in advance. Hopefully this time it will work. Thank you again, NGFrem (talk)
02:19:53, 30 October 2017 review of submission by Alpertuzcu
I accidentally submitted my draft a few days ago while it was still in works. Since your decline, I have written the article now with resources, and could you please re-review it for me when you have a chance? If there's anything missing I'd be glad to fix it. Thank you
23:21:44, 13 November 2017 review of submission by Randomloves74
Not requesting a re-review, just wanted to ask if the problem with the article is that ALLBold text the quotation marks in the drafted article need to have footnotes before I can resubmit again. Just want to make sure that I have it right. Also are there other things I need to change in the article so that I will not have any not issues. Thank you
Adding some references after your review
Hello, i added some references after your review on Draft: Tuna beklevic
Can you make a new review if possible?
06:45:27, 21 November 2017 review of submission by AnRoCa
we adjusted our wording and added a few references. We're still trying to adapt to Wikipedia's guidelines and hope that our adjustments are going in the right direction. The new references are reliable and independent as requested and should display the notability of our organization. We also adjusted the wording and hope it fits Wikipedia's requirements. Please share your thoughts with us and let us know which further steps should be taken.
Thank you for your help.
Best regards, AnRoCa.
My submission at Articles for creation: Francoism in Catalonia (October 24)
Hi Sulfurboy, I was surprised that my article was rejected, because it is not actually a new article. All I did was translate the existing Spanish Wikipedia article into English, so any stylistic criticism you might have is directly derived from the original source. Also I didn't find out how I could add the sources section to my submission - I would refer to the same sources as the original.
Is there any way we can improve the translation without deviating too much from the original?
Kind regards and thanks for the review,
David — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winter Bride (talk • contribs) 11:03, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
14:10:22, 21 November 2017 review of submission by PATRIZIA KinderHaus-Stiftung
I have added additional independent and reliable sources. Meanwhile there are eight independent sources, from which two are official federal/state sources.
Unfortunately I have no idea what else to add. How many/what kind of sources are expected?
Any hints what to do if these are all available sources?
Thank you in advance