The Toyota Land Cruiser has achieved iconic status in Australia, South America and Africa as the unkillable 4x4, but this article says nothing about that. It's just a laundry list of model specs. Any Australian would be baffled at how little narrative we've managed to put around this. --Guy (Help!) 12:09, 16 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This article makes it clear that it discusses a central issue in both the daily lives of Kenyans and the country's international relations, but it needs a lot more references and statistics. It also needs a lot more historical context than its current sources (two news articles and the CIA World Factbook) can provide. I've done what I can to improve it, but it's well outside my specialty. --NeonMerlin 07:42, 17 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This article is on an important fundamental term in simple mathematics but it was written by a mathematician. It is not understandable to the common reader. An older comment on the talk page states ″This should be translated into English!″Tucoxn (talk) 08:43, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I modified this one; did that help?--Carwil (talk) 15:30, 17 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The Islamic Golden Age is a pretty large and well documented article, but the Indian Golden Age is just a few paragraphs. The era gave us Chess, the Kama Sutra and even the concept of zero! Originally I was looking for a book on Amazon about this golden age but there was also a lack of options there, as they have a number of Islamic Golden Age books but none on India's.
(Cryptozoology has improved in quality in the past month, with new photos and references increasing the overall status of the article) --Gniniv (talk) 09:15, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
