Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of WarCry band members/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Scorpion⁰⁴²² 18:04, 22 October 2008 (UTC).[reply]

List of WarCry band members[edit]

I'm nominating this list because in my opinion, meets the FLC. It shows the references (are from spanish sources but well-quoted and showing the actual names and dates of retrievement. It tells "everything" related to how the members joined and departed from the band. It shows a timeline with the dates for "album releases" and when the members formed part of the group. I really think this article meets the FLC. Rockk3r Spit it Out! 06:09, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

*Support - as nominator Rockk3r Spit it Out! 04:32, 11 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

~~Oppose~~ Comments

Resolved comments from Gary King (talk) 03:14, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

"from Avalanch." – "from another band, Avalanch."
"with the songs they had composed in their spare time. " – "with songs they composed in their spare time. "
"Avalanch disapproved of the project, and expelled them from the band. " – up until this point I thought they were already expelled. It's gotta be made clearer that the events before this sentence took place before their expulsion.
"as soon as they were joining the band." – "as soon as they formed the band."
"Their second work was" – "Their second album was"
"at the end of 2002" – "in late 2002"
"The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." – "The band embarked on a year-long supporting tour throughout Spain."

The article still needs a copyedit. I stopped at "The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." Gary King (talk) 20:55, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

"ejected in August 2007, which ocurred on amicable terms." – "ejected in August 2007 on amicable terms."
"A month later was revealed" – "A month later it was revealed"

Gary King (talk) 03:14, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done: I already fixed all the mistakes you found. Rockk3r Spit it Out! 02:40, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Not neccessary, but could any English language references be found?
Change publisher names to full names instead of website names, for example maxmetal.net to Max Metal.

Overall, good looking article, all previous members seem to be sourced in the lead. Sunderland06 (talk) 01:25, 11 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done: The references show the publusher name, but I couldn't find th references in English. Found some English refs in different places, but they're not reliable at all, or are just commercial sites which show info posted only by fans. Hope this doesn't affect it significantly. Rockk3r Spit it Out! 03:32, 11 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support - List is complete, although english sources would be nice I'm sure it isn't really a neccessity to have them. Good job. Sunderland06 (talk) 14:02, 11 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done: I changed some Spanish references with 2 in English (one from the english version of their website, and the other one from allmusic.) Rockk3r Spit it Out! 02:48, 12 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've been thinking, you know where you have the quote of the spanish section in the referece, would it not be possible to have an english quote instead, as this is the english wikipedia, it'll help towards establising their reliability if people know what it says. Sunderland06 (talk) 18:12, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done: Instead of taking out the spanish quotes, I added the english translation to each quote. Now it tells the actual ref in Spanish (in italic font) followed by a divider (a dash) and the English translation at the end. Rockk3r Spit it Out! 05:41, 17 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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