Wikipedia:Peer review/1997 European Grand Prix/archive1

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1997 European Grand Prix[edit]

Looking for any suggestions on improvements that could be made to the article including technical terms that aren't explained well enough for a non-F1 audience, content improvements, style/tone improvements and any other problems. Looking to improve to at least GA-standard. Alexj2002 14:33, 20 November 2006 (UTC)

  • Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 00:52, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
  • Some comments:
    • The content of Pre-race situation section is not good enough. The 2nd paragraph is confusing, and it is a bit orphan. The last paragraph is even worse with only one very long sentence. Split long sentences to get crisper meaning. For a FA-level article, the Pre-race situation needs more materials to describe the tense situation between Schumacher and Villeneuve. Search news archives. I think there are more than just simply a cartoon.
    • Needs more wikilink.
Indon (reply) — 11:31, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments, I'm not sure what you mean by materials? Does the article text not describe the pre-race situation enough or is it a lack of images? The latter is not actionable for a GA/FA (although if improvements can be made it's still good to know about them). Alexj2002 17:22, 21 November 2006 (UTC)