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Birmingham campaign[edit]

I've worked extensively on this article since October, just simply stunned that it was not of better quality when I found it. I would like to nominate it for FA and would appreciate any suggestions on what more to add or change before that review process. Thanks, Moni3 (talk) 15:54, 25 December 2007 (UTC)

  • Small comment. For someone unfamiliar with the context of the article, neither the place (ie. United states, you just mentioned alabama) and time (19??) are mentioned in the lead. These are necessary to define the spatial and temporal context. CG (talk) 19:16, 25 December 2007 (UTC)
Originally I had a infobox that mentioned that, but it looked bad with the photo at the top of the page. So, thanks for catching the time frame in the lead. With Alabama and the term "African Americans" is it not clear where it took place? --Moni3 (talk) 01:51, 26 December 2007 (UTC)
  • I for one think you've done an outstanding job with the article, Moni3. You've put me to shame. --Dystopos (talk) 08:53, 26 December 2007 (UTC)
Thanks, again, Dystopos. It was a pleasure, and I hope the article reflects the importance of the event. --Moni3 (talk) 16:04, 26 December 2007 (UTC)