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Carpal tunnel syndrome[edit]

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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve it's quality. I would much rather have quality over quantity so any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Your help will certainly help me improve this article.

Thanks, --Marixa1105 (talk) 16:26, 2 May 2010 (UTC)

Comments by Cryptic C62:

  • The lead section definitely needs work, though I suppose it could wait until you're done working on the rest of the article (that's what I usually do). In any case, the lead should contain information from every major section of the article. At first glance, Prevention, Diagnosis, and History are not mentioned.
  • Several sections are completely devoid of wikilinks, such as the lead, History, Anatomy, and Symptoms. Long term recovery and Physiotherapy would also benefit from having more wikilinks. Words like "idiopathic" and "paresthesia" should definitely be linked on their first occurences.
  • Avoid making statements such as "There is no evidence that wrist splinting is disease modifying." without a citation. See WP:Verifiability for more information.

If you want more help, leave a note on my talk page. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 17:20, 10 May 2010 (UTC)