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Charles Manson[edit]

This is a pretty good article, but I'm putting it up for peer review to make sure it can become successful in the FAC. Any suggestions/comments? — Wackymacs 08:06, 24 November 2005 (UTC)

  • A cursory glance reaveals the article is too much of a list and the Toc is granulated. No need for subsections. =Nichalp «Talk»= 18:34, 27 November 2005 (UTC)
    • It seems to me that only the 'in music' section is a list, the other sections have a good deal of context not in list form, but in comprehensive paragraphs. — Wackymacs 18:41, 27 November 2005 (UTC)
      =Possible Motive=; =Media influence= are listy. Too many subheadings. Needs to be reduced. =Nichalp «Talk»= 07:31, 28 November 2005 (UTC)