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Image Lake[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm interested in bringing Image Lake to GA status, but I would like some feedback on the article before proceeding.

Thanks, — SamXS 00:59, 19 October 2013 (UTC)

Comments from LT910001[edit]

Thanks for your edits to this article! This article certainly reads very well, and is illustrated by some beautiful pictures. For GA nomination, I'd note the following (please take with a grain of salt!):

  • Broadness: the article doesn't make much mention of the ecology of the area of animals/insects/plants/trees that grow here. I don't know enough about the local indigenous history, but an expanded mention of relevance to the indigenous persons of the area might be warranted.
  • Lead and description: relating to the above, I feel this article would benefit from an expanded description of Image lake, for example, features, wildlife, surrounding geography etc.
  • Readability: the article is impacted by having a lot of proper nouns, almost every sentence having 1-2 capitalised references. Suggest decapitalise compass directions, geographical epochs, and Wikilink (even to red links) the first mention of local geographical structures.
  • Other than that, verifiability, neutrality and images are excellent.

I'd certainly encourage you to nominate for GA when the article has been expanded a little. I hope this advice is useful! Kind regards, LT910001 (talk) 01:41, 9 November 2013 (UTC)