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List of number-one Billboard Top Latin Albums of 2001[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want this lists to be as good as possible, and also I want some feedback about them.
Thanks, Jaespinoza (talk) 06:37, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here.
- I just reviewed the 2000 list so I thought I would look at 2001. Since they are very similar in format and share some text, so of this will be repetitive. Nice to see how these have improved - not too much to comment on that has not been addressed already, so most of this will be nit-picky. Since Latin is capitalized in the title, should it be chart that features Latin music information?. FIXED!
- Needs a copyedit too - The number-one albums of 2001, according to this chart were twenty ... could be simpler, just say There were twenty number-one albums on this chart in 2001... Ask for copyedit help at WP:PRV and tell them this is short - not too much to edit!. FIXED!
- Per WP:LEAD this is too short for four paragraphs and I always say one sentence paragraphs should be combined or expanded anyway. FIXED.
- Last two paragraphs in lead are unreferenced. They are all extraordinary claims, especially Grupo Bryndis became the third act to release two number-one albums in the same year after Tex-Mex performer Selena did it on 1995 and 1996 and Enrique Iglesias in 1999. and need refs. FIXED!.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 03:47, 7 August 2008 (UTC)