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I've listed this article for peer review because its a good article that the two of us are trying to get to FAC. We are looking for more sufficient information before then, and it'll be a big bonus if we can get all problems solved before FAC, so that goes smoothly. Thanks!


Thanks, Mitch32(UP) 19:19, 14 July 2008 (UTC) & Juliancolton (via IRC)[reply]

Comments by Wackymacs (talk · contribs):

  • In the lead: "...before coming to an end at a ferry landing." -> "...before ending at a ferry landing."
  • "...both of which were created in 1827." -> "both created in 1827."
  • If linking a day/month, link the year as well.
  • "Located entirely within Adirondack State Park..."
  • "The Burlington-Port Kent Ferry is the ferry that connects NY 373 and the hamlet of Port Kent to the city of Burlington, Vermont."
  • Many other prose problems. Needs a copyedit. Contact some people from WP:PRV.
  • Ref 4 needs a "p." in front of the page number, for consistency with ref 8.
  • Ref 9 date needs linking, since the date in ref 8 is linked.
  • Otherwise looks good, though short.
  • Hope my comments are useful. Let me know if you need any help!

Wackymacs (talk ~ edits) 07:57, 17 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Ealdgyth (talk · contribs)

Hope this helps. Please note that I don't watchlist Peer Reviews I've done. If you have a question about something, you'll have to drop a note on my talk page to get my attention. (My watchlist is already WAY too long, adding peer reviews would make things much worse.) 13:38, 20 July 2008 (UTC)