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Operation Camargue[edit]

Hi, I'm hoping to make this article FA eventually, and just would like some views please! I know the background section needs expanding, a few bits of info on the later life of Regiment 95 perhaps. Also more photos but they are hard to come by, and that its overly reliant on Fall (but then, Battle of Dien Bien Phu is very reliant on Davidson). Hope this review can help make a second FA for the First Indochina War

Thanks,

SGGH speak! 16:51, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

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Thanks, I have addressed most of the points given SGGH speak! 10:03, 14 January 2008 (UTC)