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I've listed this article for peer review because I found it would be useful for the reader to know about the place. i found, the article is very informative.

Please review, and provid eyour valueable comments

Thanks, Makks2010 (talk) 04:49, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

Redtigerxyz's comments
GDibyendu's comments
  • Move the gallery to an image file and keep a link to that in see also section.
  • See also section should not link to articles which are already linked in this page text. See WP:MOS for see also section.
  • Change the tables to text.
  • Look how FA level city articles are organized. Example: Mumbai, Kolkata, Chennai, Bangalore etc. Some sections should be summary of another supporting article, particularly the sections which are long. Also, see the page on cities workgroup under Wikipedia:WikiProject India, which provides a guideline on how such an article should be organized.
  • More comments later.--GDibyendu (talk) 10:12, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
  • Move all the district related info to district page. City article should contain info on the city only. Once this is done, I have a feeling that district article is going to have more content than city article.--GDibyendu (talk) 06:34, 11 February 2009 (UTC)