Wikipedia:Peer review/Prevenient grace/archive1
I'd love to get feedback on this article, which I believe to be a pretty good one, as I hope to nominate it for featured article status. Thanks for any help! KHM03 23:38, 25 July 2005 (UTC)
- The "Doctrine in other sources" section needs more than one example, and the current one could do with some context/explanation.
- The "Objections to the doctrine" section could do with a bit more authority-if possible the criticisms of notable theologians or religious leaders could be cited to support the assertations made- "Some Christians (believe)" and "Wesleyans and Calvinists agree that man is totally depraved".
- "The article is official doctrine not only for The United Methodist Church but for many other Wesleyan denominations as well."-give some examples of other Wesleyan denominations that embrace this doctrine. Deus Ex 23:56, 25 July 2005 (UTC)