Wikipedia:Peer review/Sholom Katz/archive1

Sholom Katz

I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to see how it could improve, being one of my first articles.

Thanks, Skullovitch (talk) 14:39, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

@Skullovitch: I have checked the whole article. Would you check Basshunter article in return? List of issues:

1. "During World War II Sholom was deported to a Nazi internment camp in Bralow, Ukraine." - I think something is wrong with name "Bralow" - can't find anything about this place/city. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

2. Use surname than name or full name in the article. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

3. Missing references. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

4. "Beth Sholem synagogue" - do you know which synagogue in the United States it is or is it in Canada?

5. He mgrated to "America" or exactly to the United States? If there are sources for that. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

6. "Sholom sang for the closing scene of The Garden of the Finzi-Continis and also sang for the film, The Eichmann Story." - add years of release for films. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

7. "He made more than 160 recordings of his own music." - he did not release any single or album? There is a lot of works. Would be good to find reliable source about these works and list them and discography section and describe in Career section. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

8. Links to redirects. See Help:Link color. Eurohunter (talk) 23:10, 25 June 2022 (UTC)