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Turok: Dinosaur Hunter[edit]

Previous peer review

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I'm interested in getting some broad feedback on this article that I've spent the last week or so expanding. I've pretty much exhausted all sources, so I'm interested in prose issues and especially accessibility issues, to make sure non-gamers can understand it.

Thanks, Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (talk) 01:16, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

  • In the "Gameplay" section, there's a left-hand image directly under a heading, which I understand is deprecated.
  • In the same section, it says "When the player is at full health, the meter reads 100, while dropping to 0 subtracts one life. Gathering "spiritual points" scattered across the levels increases the player's life count by one ever 100 points accumulated." Should that be "one for every 100 points accumulated"?
  • Under "Development", the third paragraph is of limited relevance to this game; it seems to be basically about the console's capabilities. Consider trimming down to the bits that are actually about the game.
  • Apart from that, it looks good to me.—S Marshall Talk/Cont 00:09, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Just a quick question, how come the PC release dates arent listed in the infobox and dont we prefer the operating system (eg windows or linux) over the use of PC. Salavat (talk) 14:50, 12 August 2009 (UTC)