Talk:Mad Men season 1/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 21:47, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I will do this. It may take me a few days to get to it.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 21:47, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Where is the ratings content for this article?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:14, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Please link notable works in the footnotes.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 13:48, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Can we get some images in this article?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:03, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

WP:LEAD

The LEAD needs to be rewritten to summarize each section of the article.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:14, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Cast

What is the source for recurring cast episode counts?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:16, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Plot

Didn't Don grow up in a whorehouse? Didn't his flashbacks depict this?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:25, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
What happened to peggy's baby?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:25, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Episodes

"Joan goes out for a night out on the town with her roommate, who reveals her secret love for Joan." was this love unrequited?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Some details in the Plot section are omitted from the episode details. E.g., in which episode do Don get his pass from Bert Cooper on his fake ID?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Crew

"who directs each season finale" needs a citation.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:41, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

Is there a link for Metacritic?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 13:48, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Which The New York Times critic made this statement? Same for Variety?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 13:48, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Make sure all critics with WP articles are linked.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 13:48, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Please link Eisenhower and Sopranos.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 13:48, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Please incorporate the Top Ten Lists.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:27, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Accolades

Link to all specific awards won (Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Main Title Design, Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Cinematography for a One Hour Series).--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:01, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
If I am counting correctly you only account for 11 of the 15 emmy nominations.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:06, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Try to link to the specific award year if possible (for List of Peabody Award winners (2000–2009) pipe it to the proper section).--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:01, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am putting this on hold. Please respond to each concern individually by indenting responses in the following line. I will check back on this article in a week.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:06, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have just noticed that GAs like Grey's Anatomy (season 2), Fringe (season 2) and Sanctuary (season 2) put all plot content in the episode pararaphs in the table. Why don't you make sure all your plot content is in the episode paragraphs and remove it as redundant except for a summary LEAD paragraph.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:53, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I gave the nominator a nudge on 19:32, 27 June 2012 (UTC) and just gave a second reminder.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:33, 3 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have interacted with the nominator of this work and am confident that the concerns would be addressed if the nominator was active. However, the nominator has not been active for weeks. Thus, I am failing this article.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:37, 14 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Has anyone thought about looking into the gender and politics of Man Men? Would it be appropriate to link something like that on this page? There are so many interesting avenues to the show it would be a shame not to explore such a major caveat of the show on this page. Let me know! Cagrubba (talk) 23:13, 1 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]