Talk:Rosey (wrestler)/GA1

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Reviewer: Wizardman 19:25, 30 November 2009 (UTC) This article is good overall, though I do have a few concerns:

• "He later began teaming with Samu as the Samoan Gangsta Party, using the name Mack Daddy Kane." Was this around the time Kane was starting to be used in WWF, or before that? Since if they were going around the same there may be name concerns. Probably nothing actually there though, so nevermind this one if it's a coincidence.
  • No, it wasn't. Glenn Jacobs debuted as "Kane" in 1997, Anoa'i used "Mack Daddy Kane" prior to 1996. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 23:43, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
• "Anoa'i made his WWE debut on the July 22, 2002 episode of Raw with Ekmo as 3-Minute Warning, a pair of villainous savages." You mention Ekmo became Jamal later, but it should be done on first mention, since at first I couldn't figure out who that was. Did they actually go by Anoa'i and Ekmo in that first appearance? This paragraph implies it and I'm not sure if that's right.
  • Reworded to clarify. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 23:43, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
• I'd find someone to do a punctuation copyedit; I found several unnecessary commas.
• "He teamed up with Suwama to wrestle in the 2006 Real World Tag League, and they got to the final, where they were defeated by Satoshi Kojima and Hiroyoshi Tenzan." This is placed in between a ouple sentences talking about him in 2007, which makes it kinda confusing.
  • Reorganised the paragraph. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 23:43, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

I'll put this on hold and pass when this is fixed. Wizardman 19:25, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Alrighty, I got most of them. I'll let 'Blue do the punctuation review. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 23:43, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

Sounds good. I'll pass it now, assuming good faith that the punc. copyedit will be done, since for all I know I got all those issues. Wizardman 23:56, 30 November 2009 (UTC)