Talk:Yugoslav gunboat Beli Orao/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:34, 17 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

" a royal yacht and gunboat" Perhaps "a gunboat, and later a royal yacht, and then a dispatch", or else "gunboat, who later served as a royal yacht, a dispatch boat,"
- Actually, she was built as a royal yacht, with the idea that she would serve as a gunboat during wartime. I've tweaked this sentence, see what you think? PM
", World War II had not yet involved the Kingdom of Yugoslavia." perhaps "the Kingdom of Yugoslavia had not yet been a part of World War II."
- reworded, see what you think? PM
No dab links. Y
No dead links. Y
No Copyvio. Y

Other than some (possible) prose issues, article looks good to go. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:57, 17 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for having a look, Iazyges! Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:59, 17 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Article is all good, passing now. P.S. Happy to be here for the unofficial "all-official" class milestone. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 01:41, 18 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]