User talk:Gyno.Janine/sandbox

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@Gyno.Janine: Nice work on your draft. A few things that need fixing

A few minor formatting things. I fixed the reference errors, which is something that the cite tool sometimes creates
- Section headers use sentence capitalisation, not title capitalisation, so it should be "Vaginal bleeding in children" rather than "Vaginal Bleeding..." (I fixed that)
- References go after punctuation, not before (you have a mixture of the two)
It would be helpful to link terms that the average reader might be unfamiliar with - things like lichen sclerosus and hysteroscopy, for example, could be linked.
The Langan reference is fairly old (2006) - is this the most current source for discharge procedures for newborn infants? Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:02, 22 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Ian. Very helpful. Working on newer referenceGyno.Janine (talk) 22:23, 23 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Possible pages to Edit[edit]

? on Sandbox---draft and comments of previous articles--possible to have subpages or ? just a new topic-- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gyno.Janine (talk • contribs) 17:01, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Menstrual Suppression--previous page--C level--low importance---Initial Author or new page

Menstruation--Start level

Specula--C class mid importance

OHVIRA Female Genital anomalies, mullerian anomalies, ASRM classification-- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gyno.Janine (talk • contribs) 17:48, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Vaginal Bleeding--Start class--top importance women's health--previous worked on

Menarche--C class, Top importance women's health--

Pediatric Gynecology--need reference under gynecology--need links out to other articles-- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gyno.Janine (talk • contribs) 17:41, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sterilization--Start class--vital article-- The subject of 3 previous class assignments-- Much discussion--years worth--is it worth wading in?

Comment on Sterilization-- top level--organization mixes in bullets both male and female sterilization needs LOTS of copyediting--writing is TERRIBLE stats on childlessness need to be updated historic need to prove a reason--children # x age = controversy on Medicaid rules and waiting period--both too long and important-- AAP position statement on sterilization and disability inaccuracies on intersex and sterilization Listed under medical, but the sociologic and psychologic factors around sterilization are really the focus--

Disabilities--

Pelvic examination--Start--mid importance----NEEDS Disability info--- Gyno.Janine (talk) 19:41, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comment on pelvic Exam Article diistinguish visit from exam Intro--add pap smear Change reference for pelvic exams as routine re ACOG Add to well-women visit Add reference to my book and/or FIGIJ Ref for Trauma-informed care Paragraph on how to do-- Chaperone Relaxation-- NEEDED SECTION ON WOMEN WITH DISABILITIES--different abiities, physical disabiliities-- Image--needs to be rotated 90 degrees counter clockwise Ext exam--xs hair labia--wide variation in size/symmetry--labia library as reference Need reference and link to hymen hemorroids pelvic organ prolapse==POPQ assessment defn of ruugae Add image of different sizes of speculum or link to specuulum "vaginal swabs"--vaginal secretions 1-2 fingers for bimanual-- Bimanual as separate section Uterus--size, shape, consistency, mobility, tnederness, position RV exam described-- pregnancy--omit bulleted list re high risk pregnancy

Pap test--frequency--