Talk:French ironclad Bouvines

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Review: June 2, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 02:09, 1 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

1. Prose On hold

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments[edit]

1.

Is there a specific reason that the convention of having the subject of article in bold in the first sentence isn't done here?
- 'Cause I'm an idiot?
"The crew of the Bouvines class numbered 18 officers and 318 ratings; service as a flagship added 5 more officers and 33 more ratings.[2]" - This suggests 336 and 374, the infobox states 333 and 371
- Typo, fixed to 15 officers
"The Bouvines class had a full-length waterline armor belt of steel that tapered from the maximum thickness of 464 mm (18.3 in) amidships to 250 mm (9.8 in) at the ship's ends." - Infobox gives 434 for the top number.
"others, including Rear Admiral Chateauminois" - Is his full name known?
"briefly became the flagship of Rear Admiral Ménard" - Is full name known?
" was replaced by Rear Admiral Escande" - Ditto as above
- I've been unable to find their first names. None of them are listed in my biographical dictionary of French admirals.

2.

Referencing looks good.

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6.

Licensing looks good.

7.

Placing on hold, just a few things to tighten up.

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:35, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]