Talk:Alchi Monastery/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 22:52, 20 April 2010 (UTC)

I am reviewing this article and will be adding comments as I go. I am also doing some copy editing which you are free to revert if I err.

• "Dukhang or Assembly Hall, the Main Temple (gTsug-lag-khang), which is a three-storied temple called the Sumtseg (gSum-brtsegs), which is considered a Kashmiri style structure that is seen in many monasteries; the third temple is called the Manjushri Temple('Jam-dpal lHa-khang); in addition, there are the Great Chörten and the Small Chörten." - I can't tell what goes with what temple. There are three: a, b and c. What are they?
• There is a reason not to use quotations in the lead. Since, per WP:LEAD, the lead is a summary of the article, you would have to repeat the quote in the body of the text.
  • Done as suggested. Please see if it is in order

Thanks.

Xtzou (Talk) 22:52, 20 April 2010 (UTC)

This is really nice. Such a fast review. Thank you, Xtzou. I am acting on your second observation first. I have made the changes in the lead and repeated the last para with the quotes in the main section under the Structures section in the second para. I hope it is OK. Please let me know if more chnages or corrections are required. '

As regards the first comment, there is littel conflusion. The chortens are just outside the limits of temples but within the complex. There is grammatical error in the first sentrence. It should read "Dukhang or Assembly Hall and the Main Temple (gTsug-lag-khang), which is a three-storied temple called the Sumtseg (gSum-brtsegs) are built in Kashmiri style as seen in many monasteries; the third temple is called the Manjushri Temple ('Jam-dpal lHa-khang). In addition, there are the Great Chörten and the Small Chörten." I hope this explanation is clear. --Nvvchar (talk) 00:42, 21 April 2010 (UTC)

• More comments
• "Traditionally, the creation of the Alchi complex is attributed to the famous scholar-translator Rinchen Zangpo (958–1055) in the tenth century, along with Lamayuru, Wanla, Mang-gyu and Sumda." I don't understand this sentence. It is the second sentence in History section and should orient the reader. I can't tell if "Lamayuru, Wanla, Mang-gyu and Sumda" are other architectural accomplishments or other names that the complex has been attributed to. I figured it out!

• I suggest moving and putting in its place, as the latter features one of the four small shrines and is the only interior shot pertaining to the quote in that section, as far as I can determine.

• Also, it might be good to move up near Dukhang where the door frames are mentioned.
  • Thanks. Moved both images.--Nvvchar (talk) 16:04, 21 April 2010 (UTC)

• I realize that you have received some inconsistent information about the punctuation of captions. The rule is to add a period only if it is a complete sentence, or there is more than one sentence fragment. See Mos - Formatting of captions. Xtzou (Talk) 16:23, 21 April 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks for moving the images. It is a very interesting article. Xtzou (Talk) 16:30, 21 April 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

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2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

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4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• Good work! Xtzou (Talk) 16:30, 21 April 2010 (UTC)