Talk:Analysis of clinical trials

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Copy edit section "Intention to treat"[edit]

  • "have often" --> "often have" -- fix awkward word order
  • remove 16 instances of unnecessary 'the'
  • "issue" --> "issues" -- fix number agreement
  • "came up" --> "started" -- fix awkward word choice
"started" is better, but not necessarily the best alternative
  • "when...can be obtained, they cannot" --> "when...can be obtained, they cannot" -- separate conditional clause
  • "even not" --> "not even -- fix awkward word order
  • change "Two issues are involved ..." to 2 additional paragraphs following a colon
I hope I have gotten this right -- I am no expert in the field, just a native speaker w/ good grammar skills

173.45.200.48 (talk) 16:58, 20 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Copy edit balance of article[edit]

  • remove or change at least 6 unnecessary instances of 'the'
  • "has been" --> "is"
  • "to compare" --> "of comparing" -- fix non- idiomatic word choice
  • "the fact of" --> "" -- unnecessary
  • link National Academy of Sciences & Food and Drug Administration

173.45.200.48 (talk) 17:30, 20 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Intention to treat" paragraph[edit]

The "Intention to treat analysis" section should be trimmed from this article and relevant information should transferred to its own article here: Intention to treat analysis

198.168.152.20 (talk) 19:02, 2 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I just performed this 198.168.152.20 (talk) 20:41, 2 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Circular linking, "Last observation carried forward" links to itself[edit]

The section "Last observation carried forward" links to "Main article: Last observation carried forward" which leads back to the linking section here ----Bstard12 (talk) 19:49, 21 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: Osmosis Wikipedia-editing course Summer 2022[edit]

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 13 June 2022 and 10 July 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sacalle96 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: ImmunoglobulinA.

— Assignment last updated by Saurabh3131 (talk) 12:33, 3 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Merge and delete proposal[edit]

Although this article was created in 2008, it has had less than 100 total edits, has few editors or readers following it, and contains little useful information. We have an article on clinical trials, which is more fully developed and visited (>11,000 views in the past month), and where a user would expect to find information on analysis of clinical trials. Following WP:MERGE, I propose merging useful information and sources to the clinical trial article, and then deleting this article. Editors are invited to comment. Zefr (talk) 02:50, 29 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I believe this article deserves its own page, see WP:POPULARPAGE and WP:INVOLVE and point 2 of WP:NOTMERGE
A separate existing article needing more content is not a good reason to delete this one. 50.45.170.185 (talk) 16:24, 29 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]