Talk:Dæmonen/GA1
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Reviewer: Gabriel Yuji (talk · contribs) 16:10, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
The article seems good to me. Only a few issues you must address:
- Its mentioned on lead that Dæmonen is designed by Bolliger & Mabillard, but there is no mention about it on the article's body.
- The flow of sentece is broken by parentheses in "Following the turn, the train enters the main 65.6-foot (20.0 m) drop (reaching the roller coasters top speed of 48 miles per hour (77 km/h)) leading directly into a vertical loop."
- "Also, unlike traditional steel roller coasters, Dæmonen has no floor on its trains." needs a source
- "In 2004, Dæmonen was voted the 98th best steel roller coaster in the world in Mitch Hawker's Best Steel Roller Coaster Poll. The roller coaster peaked at 65th place in 2005." lack of source
- Is really necessary to mention "Dæmonen has never placed in Amusement Today's Golden Ticket Awards"? I think it would only be helpful/informative for readers if it had placed on this award.
Gabriel Yuji (talk) 16:10, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
@Gabriel Yuji: I have addressed your comments. Thanks for the review!--Dom497 (talk) 20:09, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
Since you have addressed the issues I pointed and I couldn't find other issues, I'll pass it. Congratulations! Gabriel Yuji (talk) 01:21, 26 November 2013 (UTC)