Talk:Domagoj of Croatia

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Fixed few typos and reworded some sentences. No data changes were made. The text could benefit from further clarifications, though. The nature of second conflict with Venetia (after the Frankish conquest of Bari) is rather unclear. According to text, Venetians renewed their attacks (on whom? pirates, coastal cities?), while Domagoj funded corsaires. This kind of confuses me. PS. I'm no expert in history

conquer or liberate?[edit]

The text reads, "Domagoj helped the Franks, as their vassal, to conquer Bari from the Arabs in 871"

Common usage might suggest it say, "Domagoj helped the Franks... to liberate Bari..." assuming that is what is meant.

Mike 10:48, 29 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]