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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:34, 9 June 2019 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:34, 9 June 2019 (UTC)
- "On 3 November 1957 the Soviets sent Laika, a dog, into space on Sputnik 2. The dog was a stray found on the streets of Moscow." Change this to "On 3 November 1957 the Soviets sent Laika, a stray dog found on the streets of Moscow, into space on Sputnik 2."
- I've seen people use nosecone or nose cone. Which one is it?
- "Centre d'Enseignement et de Recherches de Médecine Aéronautique (CERMA), purchased 14 cats from a pet dealer for the testing" Comma not needed.
- "Excluding the reticular measurements, high quality data was recorded throughout most of the flight. Data recorded during reentry was of lower quality." Merge these two sentences.
- "The statue will be located in Eastern France at the International Space University." When was it announced?
- Link Ham in the article, and remove the Laika and Ham links in the see also section.
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:25, 24 June 2019 (UTC)