Talk:Jonas Mouton

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Date	Process	Result
December 26, 2010	Good article nominee	Listed

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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Jonas Mouton was nationally ranked as a safety in high school football but has started for three seasons at weakside linebacker for the Michigan Wolverines?

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jonas Mouton/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: CrowzRSA 17:58, 23 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

What verifies Mouton played as a defensive back at Venice High School.?
- done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:01, 26 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
What verifies The major high school rating reports evaluated him as a safety?
- That is supported by the remainder of the fully reffed paragraph.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:01, 26 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Shouldn't "Early life" be titles "High School" instead?
- O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:03, 26 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Per WP:ORDINAL, single digit numbers should be spelt out.
- Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:05, 26 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
You have consistency issues with spelling out numbers and numerals (i.e. he started eleven of the twelve games, a new career high with 11 tackles)
- fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:34, 26 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Using "v." is preferred over "vs." (i.e. "Bears v. Packers" is preferred over "Bears vs. Packers"
- fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:07, 26 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:Lead
- Expanded to 2 paragraphs.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:14, 26 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Please fix dab links
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:09, 26 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Result: GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail: