Talk:Kenneth R. Shadrick/GA2
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk • contribs • count) 00:46, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
Hello! I will be reviewing this article for possible GA status. My review should be posted shortly. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 00:46, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
- Though improvements are possible, all in all this article meets the GA criteria, so it's been passed. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:11, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
Writing and formatting[edit]
- "when his body was taken to an outpost where reporter Marguerite Higgins identified him as the first soldier killed in the war" - grammar
- Avoid "month of year" phrasings
Accuracy and verifiability[edit]
- Spotchecks of a few sources found no issues with verifiability or close paraphrasing
- Not sure why, but most of your harvlinks don't appear to be working
- Use a consistent format for retrieval dates
- Check italicization in citations
- Be consistent in whether you use
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Broad[edit]
- Do we know his mother's maiden name?
- Maybe a bit too much background on the Korean War, not enough on Shadrick's involvement. Do we know when he was sent to Korea, for example?
Neutrality[edit]
- In the American high-school system, what grade is represented by "A"?
Stability[edit]
No issues
Images[edit]
- File:Kenneth_Shadrick.jpg: source doesn't indicate the original source of this image - how do we know it's US Army?
- File:24_Infantry_Division_SSI.svg is sourced to itself
- File:United_Nations_Service_Medal_for_Korea_Ribbon.svg, File:Korean_War_Service_Medal_ribbon.png, File:Presidential_Unit_Citation_(Korea).svg: on what source(s) were these images based?