Talk:Max Wünsche

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Platz der Leibstandarte[edit]

This passage reads POV and has the appearance of citing from wartime propaganda:

On 25 February 1943 Wünsche led his tanks into action against a defensive position manned by the Russian 350th Rifle Division. Supported by artillery and a company of SS Grenadiers, Wünsche's battalion launched an attack and rolled over the Russian front lines, destroying a number of anti-tank guns.^[1] Wünsche's assault would lead to the destruction of 47 artillery pieces and anti-tank guns. The assault also led to 800 Russian troops being killed.^[1]

References

^ ^a ^b Nipe & Spezzano 2002, p. 129.

At the very least, this should be attributed to whereever Nipe & Spezzano are citing this from. Moving here for discussion.

K.e.coffman (talk) 17:59, 14 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

[FOOTNOTENipeSpezzano2002129-1] Nipe & Spezzano 2002, p. 129.

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