Talk:Moonscape

Improvements?

Working on editing pages for a course assignment, including leaving comments regarding the page I'm submitting edits for. First thoughts on this page: the topic doesn't lend itself to much description beyond the simple definition that's already here, but I think the addition of further historical precedence beyond Ginz's sketch could give a fuller picture of the topic itself. Also the addition of clearer formatting and embedded images might be helpful. Hend4679 (talk) 08:29, 8 December 2016 (UTC)

Just went through an editing/sourcing phase, expanded on a few topics and added references and an image. Hend4679 (talk) 09:27, 8 December 2016 (UTC)