Talk:Secret Santa (song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 22:42, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox
- I am not sure if “Christmas music” qualifies as a genre; the main article about it mentions how it often includes multiple genres. I am not sure if it should be in the genre parameter of the infobox. I would remove it.
- I have told in the past that the wikilink for “music critics” is not necessary.
- For this sentence (Italian singer-songwriter released a cover of "Secret Santa" to his Instagram account on Christmas Eve in 2018.), you are missing the name of the artist.
- Background and recording
- For this part (Before the upcoming holiday season,), I do not think that “upcoming” is necessary as it is clear from the context of the rest of the sentence.
- For this sentence (On December 24, 2018, Italian singer-songwriter released a cover of "Secret Santa" to his official Instagram account.), you are missing the name of the artist.
- Composition
- I am uncertain if the block quote is necessary for this article as Stefani is talking the album as a whole rather than this specific song. It is probably more appropriate for the article on the album instead, as a reader may assume that the quote is about the song.
- Unlink “Santa Baby” here as you already have it linked in a previous section.
- Reception
- Everything looks good here.
- Credits and personnel
- Do you think a section for this would be necessary?
- Final comments
Everything looks good. I only have a few minor comments, and I will pass this. Hope you are having a wonderful new year so far! Aoba47 (talk) 12:07, 3 January 2019 (UTC)