Talk:Thomisus onustus

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Check species distribution. If found in tropical areas as reported in the article, its distribution cannot be Paleartic only — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gelegans2 (talk • contribs) 10:08, 2 June 2014 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 15 September 2020 and 17 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Stomatz.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 11:19, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Student Peer Edit

This entry is very well organized and very well referenced. I love this spider, when I saw this entry, I thought that it was a butterfly, and as I read, I realized that it was a spider. I changed few things in this entry: in the measurements, I added a space between the length of the spider and the units; I added a hyperlink to Thomisus zyuzini, but this species does not have an article yet; I added a hyperlink to scopula and apophyses. I made some minor grammatical changes; I really like the way is written. Also, a map could guide the reader to know the countries where this species occurs. In the Description section, there is a this “(2,3)”, I don’t know what you mean by that you should recheck this. Salazarjhan (talk) 18:08, 30 November 2020 (CST)

This is a very informative article. Reading this article, I became very interested in the spider and wanted to learn more. There is a good amount of information across many topics here and it is presented very nicely. Overall, the article is also well-written. However, there were a few spots where I edited the grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity. I also added a few hyperlinks to other Wikipedia articles so the readers can get more context for the information presented in the article. Nickh994 (talk) 04:03, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I very much enjoyed learning about your spider! There were a lot of cool facts and points that were made about their diet! It was so well-written that all I did was add more information to the non-predatory feeding section. I went into more detail about the spiders’ ability to survive without food and how the different diet in the spring (ie. nectar and pollen) may allow these spiders to live longer without food. Please let me know if you have any questions for me. Wikispiders11 (talk) 04:05, 7 December 2020 (UTC)