Talk:Una-class submarine/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:28, 28 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:28, 28 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I cleaned up the infobox a bit, but you need to provide conversions for the diving depth and the power of the motors as well as their usage in the main body.
No bullets in the infobox.
Capitalize Lieutenant Colonel as it's a proper noun in that usage.
Convert 10 meters. In general provide a conversion to English units on the first usage of any measurement.
utilizing a Stirling engine change "utilizing" to "the addition of"
Hyphenate "single hulled" as it's a compound adjective for design.
You do not need to specify the output when converting knots; it automatically converts into kmh and mph.
Special forces in the description paragraph needs to be replaced by special forces personnel or naval commandos; something like that.
No DABs, no overlinks, external links good.
Images appropriately licensed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:24, 5 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

First of all, thank you for your fixes. I hope I answered to all of the requests above with the edits I made. Please let me know if I missed something. --Saxum (talk) 14:00, 5 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]