User talk:Amatus501/sandbox

Suggestions from ChemLibrarian

Good job! Here are a few suggestions.

The introduction section do not need a sub-title. Please delete it so that the table of content shows up after the introduction session.

The image is a little too big. See more about formatting image here Wikipedia:Extended image syntax.

As you probably have noticed, is it really necessary to cite a large amount of articles in one sentence, like the last sentence. I am not sure if it's because of the original article but I strongly suggest you change that if possible. Or maybe it just needs more edits to articulate what each article is about. A deeper discussion here is that we are not trying to do a review but an encyclopedia article. So, citing a secondary source like a review article is better than citing a lot of original research articles.

ChemLibrarian (talk) 16:14, 20 December 2013 (UTC)