User talk:Jdfellows

Hi! Welcome to Wikipedia! The reason that I'm reverting your change to Exodus International is that Wikipedia articles strive for neutrality, which means wording that doesn't promote any particular point of view. The article I linked to is useful reading for any new Wikipedian. The current wording of the introduction accurately explains what Exodus is, without making value judgements one way or the other, while your version seems to take a pretty strong position on Exodus. If you really think that your version is more neutral, it would be a good idea to discuss your proposed change on the article's talk page and get consensus from the community before changing it- that's the way we handle changes on controversial subjects like this one. Thanks! -FisherQueen (Talk) 13:02, 31 January 2007 (UTC)