User talk:Jiajing Liu/sandbox

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I noticed that you have added and changed some of the information in the “History” section and I think I’m well informed by this section. Although I think some of the tones in this section can be more neutral, for example, the beginning part “Of all the famous rock-gardens in history, only one has survived.” I also like that you added major "Tourist Attractions" and "Tourism information" to this article, which makes it more complete and can offer more tourists information for people who are interested in visiting there. You can also update the lead to add an overview of the sections that you added. Some of the reference links also need to be fixed since they do not link to the right website anymore: “World Cultural Heritage (2004), The Classical Gardens of Suzhou, CIP, p. 217, ISBN 7-214-03763-7" this one in particular.--Violetzq (talk) 23:36, 7 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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