Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Montreal

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Montreal[edit]

I think this article is very complete and accurate. the pictures are beautiful and relevent to the text.

PYMontpetit 20:25, 24 August 2006 (UTC)

  • Comment - the article seems to have a fairly low number of citations, especially given its length. WilyD 20:33, 24 August 2006 (UTC)
  • Object. Too many short stubby sections, some of which are only a sentence long; these need to be expanded or merged into neighbouring sections (I'd lean toward the latter because the table of contents is very long). Inline external links should be converted to footnotes (article is tagged with {{cleanup-references}}). Extraordinary Machine 21:35, 24 August 2006 (UTC)
  • Object per Ext. Machine. Too few refs, ref format needs fixed, external jumps need fixed, stubby, too many lists, etc.Rlevse 22:07, 24 August 2006 (UTC)
  • Object. The massive lead, info box, and table of contents alone almost killed this one for me. There are also many lists and many paragraphs that are too short. --Danaman5 03:03, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
  • Object. Needs more citations and fewer short paragraphs. The strip club section seems a bit fishy; it definitely needs to be cited. The article could also use a short section about dumbass American kids who take up buses up there to take advantage of the drinking age; to my knowledge, that's one of the city's primary methods of making money. Stilgar135 02:11, 26 August 2006 (UTC)