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Alexander Dennis Enviro 500[edit]

This article was created by myself. However, I think that this article is not good enough to be an FA. How can I improve it? 202.40.210.178 08:03, 24 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I have cleaned it up generally by removing some smaller sections and merging them into the larger sections. It needs to cite some specific references, and I suggest an expansion of the lead paragraph. A couple more photos would be good as well. Not too bad so far. Have you considered registering an account here at Wikipedia? — Wackymacs 19:59, 24 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
- My name is cheung1303. I tried to put some articles to Peer Review to ask for suggestions of improvements.
The intoduction is expanded, and the references section is added. 202.40.210.244 05:58, 25 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
- - You should always post messages and edit on Wikipedia using your user name, you'll be trusted more. The lead is still a bit too short considering the length of the article. Before posting things for peer review, you might want to check Wikipedia:What is a featured article first. Thanks. — Wackymacs 07:16, 25 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
The introduction is now expanded. It now looks like:

Alexander Dennis Enviro 500 is one of the bus models made by Transbus International (now renamed Alexander Dennis) of United Kingdom. It is designed and built according to current European standards and the operating environment of Hong Kong. As of September 2005, there are 235 buses in service, of which 3 belong to Long Win Bus. This bus model now serves on various routes all over Hong Kong, and good reputation was made by the passengers.

219.77.61.114 11:39, 25 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]