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Andrew Crofts (footballer)[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I think it's a potential GA, but want to know what might still need addressing

Thanks, ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:39, 30 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Jameboy (talk · contribs)

DoB template in infobox should include df=yes, for date format consistency
"in which a draw with Nottingham Forest led to the team's relegation from the Football League Championship" - which team, Forest or Gillingham? Just so it is 100% clear.
"In the 2005–06 season he was the team's most regular playing" - most regular player? I'm wondering whether the phrasing could be improved further, as it implies he was the one who ate the most All-Bran :-) Maybe that's just me.
"scored 8 goals" - eight goals, per MOSNUM
I would put the references in two columns as there's plenty of them

Overall, very good work I think. Cheers. --Jameboy (talk) 20:13, 30 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All fixed, thanks for the comments -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 06:59, 1 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]