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Ben Gurion International Airport[edit]

Wanting feedback as to whether this article in general is a 'good article' which could be put forward as an 'A' grade standard airport article. Flymeoutofhere 12:27, 21 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, If you have any questions, please contact me at my talk page. Ian Manka 18:13, 21 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Just glancing at it, it doesn't appear to have any citations or sources, which will be an immediate barrier to A-class. Trebor 20:50, 21 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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