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Bleach (manga)[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get some feedback about issues that need to be resolved. After that, I would like to nominate it for a GA status.

Thank you for your time, (Nightwolf87 (talk) 12:06, 19 June 2014 (UTC))[reply]

Looking at it quickly, I would say it tries to represent too much information when there are separate articles or lists it could be placed in instead. Look at the soundtrack. That's just terribly painful for the eyes. There's a soundtrack article for that. It happens in most sections. Aside from that, (Not part of the GA criteria) I'm a bit concerned about the themes sections. I don't understand why the article is listing an individual's opinions on the series ("Drazen says this is a reminder to the audience to not abandon the old ways or risk the spirits taking offense and causing problems in the world."). I would strip that, and keep what the author says inspired him to create this and that in the series. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 09:16, 20 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]