Wikipedia:Peer review/Karma in Hinduism/archive1

This article is unique in that it discusses the differences between Karma in Hinduism vs. other religions.

Raj2004 23:17, 28 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I don't know the subject well enough to comment on the details, but hopefully others do. I can give some general advice. 1) Karma is a Sanskrit word no? If so, put it in Devanagari script and maybe also a png image for those who don't have indic fonts installed. Also a pronunciation in Sanskrit and English in ogg format would be great. 2) References should be clear which are used to add or fact check material in the article (references) and those that have not (external links or further reading). Mixing them leaves it ambiguous if any sources have been actually used as references. 3) More use of the most authoritative sources available. You seem to have quoted from the source texts and some scholars, so more of that would be great. I don't have enough familiarity with the subject to even know if your scholars are the most prominent or not, but try for that. - Taxman ^Talk 23:01, September 6, 2005 (UTC)