Wikipedia:Peer review/Matthew Cox/archive1

Matthew Cox

Article about a notorious con man and felon that I started, like to get it ready for GA. Comments welcome. Quadzilla99 02:15, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

The "Adult Life and Criminal Career" really just looks like a big block of text for me, I had to force my way through it as a narrative. Perhaps you could try breaking it up into smaller chunks/headings? Other than that, the referencing and layout looks pretty good, even if it is a little short. Lankiveil 06:52, 15 April 2007 (UTC).

Okay I added sections and did some slight expansion. Thanks for the comments! Quadzilla99 23:04, 17 April 2007 (UTC)