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Muni Metro

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I've listed this article for peer review because I am interested to bring this to GAN. I would like some feedbacks on prose in general.

Thanks, —Chris! _ct 06:08, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

• The article looks pretty good. There's a few minor issues I have:
  • It says in the lead that there are six lines while seven are listed under 1.1
  • It says in 1.2 that all the stations other than Stonestown and SF State are located in the eastern part of the city. What about the stations marked on the map on the N Judah and L Taraval Lines?
  • In 1.2 when it says the N and J enter at a third portal, do you mean second? It's only the second one listed.
  • Perhaps the meaning of Owl service should be explained in 1.4 in that sentence.
  • Maybe you can eliminate one of the things that says that the Sunset Tunnel opened in 1928 in 2.1.
  • Good luck! Alexseattle (talk) 06:20, 8 July 2009 (UTC)