Wikipedia:Peer review/Radiohead/archive1

Radiohead[edit]

The article has received GA status, but I wanted some advice on how to get it to A or even FA. It still has some way to go, and I was curious to see exactly what the community thought of it. ErleGrey 22:23, 11 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

First thing that springs to mind is that the article should have a more concise description of the band's musical style 9and its evolution). There's the "Changing roles" section, but by itself it seems superfluous. However, if it were expanded into a "Musical style and influences" section a la The Smashing Pumpkins with "Changing roles" as a subsection, that would work very well. As for more mundane suggestions, you can clean up web citations by using the "citeweb" template (visible if you open the edit window on the Smashign Pumpkins page and look up the inline references). Just copy and paste that throughout the article while changing the relevant info; it makes things easier, clearer, and much more uniform. And while you may not have all the references available at the moment, citations from the books listed would be a great addition to the article. WesleyDodds 02:29, 12 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]