Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates/2008 World Series of Poker Europe results/archive1

References

• Which citation templates are being used? There is an inconsistency with how the fields are presented, like the dates.
• Error with the citation template in ref #9.
  • I don't see it now, it must have been fixed since Feb.---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• Consistency with the publisher of Poker Listing: is it Poker Listings? or Poker Listing?
  • Fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• Ref #5 is missing a publisher, in addition to being dead.--TRUCO ⁵⁰³ 02:15, 9 February 2009 (UTC)
  • Don't see it now, must have been fixed since Feb.---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

Quick comment- The word "results" in the article name should be lower case. I don't know if moving it during this process will break anything so I won't. Otto4711 (talk) 22:21, 11 February 2009 (UTC)

• Fixed prior to April.---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

• "outside of the United States"
  • Fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "Since 1970 if one wanted to compete in the World Series of Poker, one had to travel to Las Vegas."-->Since 1970, participants have had to travel to Las Vegas if they wanted to compete in the World Series of Poker (WSOP).
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "While the WSOP held circuit events in other locations, the main tournaments, which awarded bracelets to the winners were exclusively held in Vegas."-->Although the WSOP held circuit events in other locations, the main tournaments, which awarded bracelets to the winners, were exclusively held in Las Vegas.
  • Fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "awarded outside of Las Vegas"
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "in the London area - Fifty, Leicester Square" Should be en em dash (—).
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "U.S.." Double periods.
  • Fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "did not relying upon its reputation alone" Wrong tense.
  • Not sure about this one, how would you propose rewording it?
• "On July 5, 2007 Harrah's" Comma after "2007".
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "Harrah's announced an alliance"-->Harrah's announced its alliance
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "is intended to play on Betfair's European reputation" "play on"-->build on or take advantage of.
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "In 2007, U.S. laws prevented the WSOP from accepting" Confusing, were the laws passed in 2007?
  • Fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "youngest player to ever to win a"
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "Leicester Square, London" Don't link common geographical terms such as "London".
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:25, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "Three time bracelet winner " Hyphenate "Three time".
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:25, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "The 2008 WSOPE was particularly notable as Jesper Hougaard became the first person to ever win a bracele"-->The 2008 WSOPE was particularly notable, as Jesper Hougaard became the first person to win a bracelet
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:25, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• "Ivan Demidov made news as he was one of the November"-->Ivan Demidov was one of the November
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:25, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• Captions that are not complete sentences should have periods at the end.
  • fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:25, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
• Link seven-card stud. Dabomb87 (talk) 16:06, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
  • done---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:25, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

Sources

• Ref 5, the "BluffMagazine.com. Bluff Magazine" is not necessary; just put "Bluff Magazine".
  • Fixed---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)