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rise of the kingdom of the planet of the apes[edit]
my edit on the incorrectly titled "kingdom of the planet of the apes" was correct as the film is indeed in fact called "rise of the kingdom of the planet of the apes" 2001:56A:F080:3E00:AC48:B226:BDF6:3C20 (talk) 04:47, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, but you are wrong - the movie isn't called that. -REDACTED403 (talk) 08:31, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
Shorts Fest page[edit]
The information I put in was deemed unneutral but this information I posted was just information that would better help to understand Shorts Brewing company and their mission as well as include more information about them. I would like the information to be re included. Bosshause (talk) 12:49, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Bosshause Wikipedia isn't the place for that kind of promotional and non neutral language. Do you work for the brewing company? -REDACTED403 (talk) 12:53, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- No I am currently trying to do an assignment for college where I add information to a Wikipedia article. What is making you think it is non neutral? I can always edit this to better help fit the standards. Bosshause (talk) 13:07, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- If you're doing this for an assignment, you would've gotten a poor mark from what you added before. We can definitely improve it though, please read the guidelines on POV fully and have another go. Leave me another message if you have any questions. -REDACTED403 (talk) 13:17, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- I read over the NPOV stuff and it seems I was within guidelines. who determines what is or is not neutral? Is there anyway you can allow someone else to determine if it is not neutral? The information I included did not seem to have a bias for the company. It is just quotes from websites about the company and using them does not seem to make me feel as though I am being bias. Maybe I am wrong, but the information is true and helps provide information on the company. Bosshause (talk) 13:34, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry I am currently in bed, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Teahouse is great for helping and getting answers from a few people at once. Goodnight -REDACTED403 (talk) 13:40, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- I read over the NPOV stuff and it seems I was within guidelines. who determines what is or is not neutral? Is there anyway you can allow someone else to determine if it is not neutral? The information I included did not seem to have a bias for the company. It is just quotes from websites about the company and using them does not seem to make me feel as though I am being bias. Maybe I am wrong, but the information is true and helps provide information on the company. Bosshause (talk) 13:34, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- If you're doing this for an assignment, you would've gotten a poor mark from what you added before. We can definitely improve it though, please read the guidelines on POV fully and have another go. Leave me another message if you have any questions. -REDACTED403 (talk) 13:17, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- No I am currently trying to do an assignment for college where I add information to a Wikipedia article. What is making you think it is non neutral? I can always edit this to better help fit the standards. Bosshause (talk) 13:07, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
Kirk Douglas[edit]
I have no idea who you are, nor why you have the authority to revoke changes made on this site. You sent a message that informed me that you revoked a change I made on Kirk Douglas's page because he is a "living person."
Kirk Douglas is dead. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:1c2:1b80:530:49e8:7faf:dc1e:51c0 (talk) -REDACTED403 (talk) 00:37, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- @2601:1c2:1b80:530:49e8:7faf:dc1e:51c0 Apologies, my warning didn't properly apply to your edit. However, there already is a section on the alleged rape, and your edit was definitively saying he raped her, when that doesn't seem to be the conclusion the rest of the article makes. Again, sorry for confusing him as alive. -REDACTED403 (talk) 00:45, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
Music History edits[edit]
I was adding in my sources after putting my writing in but didn't get the chance because now I can't edit. Is there a way I can edit it again I need this turned in for my grade. Thank you. Nebbiethechihuaua (talk) 13:53, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- You should be able to go to the edit history and re add your content with sources. I'm not aware of anything stopping you from editing right now. However, the way your additions are written doesn't seem very encyclopaedic in style to me, so they may be undone by someone else if they feel the same. -REDACTED403 (talk) 13:58, 30 April 2024 (UTC)