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Revision as of 01:11, 14 March 2021
COI Requests for Jardine Matheson
Request - Intro Para Changes
- Typo: 2nd sentence missing an "a" before "primary listing"
- Sold subsidiary: remove
Jardine Lloyd Thompson
from subsidiary list in 3rd sentence
- Replace,
It sponsors the Jardine Scholarship.
withIt set up the Jardine Scholarship in 1982 and established MINDSET, a mental health-focused charity in 2002.
- Link 1: https://www.bangkokpost.com/life/social-and-lifestyle/1352983/the-chosen-one
- Link 2: https://www.scmp.com/article/711667/breaking-mental-health-barriers
- Cut or move: 2nd to last sentence, as it randomly singles out the company's size 8 years ago:
In 2013, both Jardine Matheson and Jardine Strategic were among the top 200 publicly traded companies in the world, as valued by market capitalisation.
Request - Post-WWII Changes
- To add details from source, please replace this 1st sentence:
In 1961, after the firm's flotation,[15] the landmark...
withThe firm listed in Hong Kong in 1961.[15] The landmark...
Request - 1st Century Operations
- Cut
Jardine Lloyd Thompson
from 2nd sentence listing current subsidiaries.
Request - Dairy Farm Changes
- 2nd sentence
- Reword
The Dairy Farm group's retail operations range from supermarkets, hypermarkets and health and beauty to convenience and home furnishings stores, and operate under well-known local brands.
asThe Dairy Farm group's retail operations range from grocery retail and health and beauty stores to convenience and home furnishings, operating under a number of well-known local brands.
- Fourth sentence
- 4th sentence listing supermarkets: Add
[[Yonghui]]
- Link: https://www.reuters.com/article/yonghui-dairyfarm-idUSL3N10I5JV20150807
- Alt link: https://www.ft.com/content/e1d4d1da-2208-11e4-9d4a-00144feabdc0
- Add
[[MarketPlace]]
- Remove:
Shop n Save
- Switch confusing
Giant hypermarkets
withhypermarkets under the Giant brand
Request - Mandarin Oriental
- Final sentence, change from 74% to 79%
Request - Jardine Cycle
- 3rd sentence, replace the number in
employs some 201,000 people
with250,000
and add Myanmar and Thailand
- 4th sentence: add Myanmar as a country where the subsidiary operates
Request - Astra International Changes
- 1st sentence
Replace Astra is Southeast Asia's largest independent automotive group.
with the more broad and accurate; Astra is a diversified business group. The largest independent automotive group in Southeast Asia, it has seven primary businesses in Indonesia.
- 2nd to last sentence
After heavy equipment sales,
add and also general and life insurance.
- Final sentence
Remove The group is also involved in retail banking through a stake in PT Bank Permata Tbk.
Request - Corporate Structure
- 4th sentence
Change so it isn't missing the last Tai-pan: The 5th generation of Keswicks are also active within the organisation, Adam Keswick, son of Sir Chips Keswick is Deputy managing director.
to The 5th generation of Keswicks are also active within the organisation, Ben Keswick, son of Simon, is executive chairman of Jardine Matheson Group and from 2012 to 2021 was Tai-pan. Adam Keswick, son of Sir Chips Keswick, is an executive director.
- Final sentence
Change almost totally
to the less surfery fundamentally since its foundation